Saturday, August 18, 2007

quickness

it all went by so fast
all I could see were blurred lines
now it slows
I catch my breath
and focus my eyes
and see it for the very first time

2 comments:

Peter OC. said...

I really like how this is subtle but meaningful, your writing is great!

Andrew said...

This is great. Short and sweet. Each line is full of meaning yet simple and to the point. I recently posted some of my poetry from high school on my blog. Feel free to check it out.